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What sucks is that my name is Hayden

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I love this game! I really surprise ending like that is a true end RIP for MC and I love that you put Morse code in the background in route true end at first I think I was just a hallucination from the last game I play 

hey creator let me now if im just over analizinge it but hayden and ghost look like they could be related or the same person (havent finished the game yet and idk if the game mentiones the the uncanny resemblance between them but your game's good better than anything i could ever do idk how to code nor how to draw anything as good as you without a base XD lol ill stop spam commenting on your game russia out)

the grammer just makes this so cute no affence im complamenting your grammer and the game hehe (sorry i just get scared someone will be like ''hey stop being rude their grammer is good and makes the game better'' or somethin like that but i do really like the grammer tho sometimes its kinda confusing on what you mean)

im happy i found a game that represents us that get cold easily and have sensetive hearing also i like your art style its so cute but since its so cute and little scary thing will startle the player which i find cool

hey could u help me? i dunno why i keep getting stuck on this page when i've already written my name😭

Hi :D can you tell me which page you're stuck? Is it like staying on that page, don't have any dialogue coming up? If it is, did you hit on the enter button on keyboard? I think I have setting the game to be like this: if you press enter button on keyboard the dialogue will gone. If you're stuck on enter your name page at first, please don't 'press' enter button on keyboard, please 'click' the enter button on the screen! I hope this help. If it not this problem you can tell me :>

thank u for helping me<3

i just found it could be played on the safari🥹

thanks again😘

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Holy shit, oh my lord this is so good! The endings, they hit HARD! They're well done and I love the plot and its mysteries! Despite the awkward grammar, it made me read it out loud to bring out my own twist and it gave the good effect of immersion because each scare surprised the hell out of me! I like our dear MC, she gives your typical "new person" and pretty naive and sincere, a classic MC, but I love how she keeps a levelled head when it's time to get serious. But Ghost, man I love him in the endings, I adored the way he lost his mask at the ending and how insane, delusional, and so clearly inhumane he is when it's finally time to reveal to MC who he (or well, it) is. The way his dialogue flowed was really cool because you get the clear feeling that "Oh, this guy? This guys is fucked up". Also, yandere with multiple darlings??? Sign me the fuck up! I absolutely love it and I only see this in Tumblr and even that is a minority! Just, the way Ghost professed his love to all 5 of them (6 including MC) was just so raw and corrupted, I absolutely loved it!

SPOILER BELOW! Despite how much I love it (seriously, I love all the endings), there are some parts I find could work a bit more, especially when it's a lil mystery (I say this as I played mystery games and fried my brains over puzzles and having to resort to hints and playthroughs...).











I think spacing out the days more evenly would work well, especially for the first part of the visual novel which is the Investigation Portion where MC has to figure out the 5 Missing People's Case (had to rephrase that cause it was just awkward  grammar wise, but other than that it's okay!), it would have been fun to interact more with the case itself to uncover clues and witnesses and seeing the connections between the victims and Ghost (why exactly did Ghost target those people and the consequences of him taking them away) so MC and us players have something more concrete going on as to why Ghost targeted those people. 

While us players already know that Ghost is the murderer, MC doesn't and in that time you could show exactly why MC chose to go to being a detective. And in that investigation period you could be able to establish not only MC's bond with Ghost to be more stable and to make it so that MC can't believe Ghost did it but show enough of MC's personality and background to prove her convictions, but also to establish Ghost's inhuman aspects. 

Just like in Bad Ending: I trusted... who? with Ghost erasing his existence and leaving only MC to remember him. It would be more cathartic if MC ran towards other office people demanding them to know about Ghost, running out of the office to the cafe to the waitress, and anyone who Ghost and MC interacted with just so MC can prove that Ghost actually existed, all while Ghost taunts MC from her mind driving her insane.

In True Ending: Please, it would be nice if the features Ghost took from them could be reflected as we investigate, I feel as though it was redundant to have Hayden's eyes be taken out only to have MC's eyes replaced in, and Tim wasn't bald like Olivia even though Ghost used both of their hair, maybe Tim could have been bald like Olivia but be as brainwashed as Giselle and Hayden would have lost his tongue instead. That and Giselle losing her kidney is a bit weird as we can't see it from Ghost's appearances, maybe she would have lost her teeth to Ghost as in she lost her smile cause in the photo she was smiling brightly. Other than that, the entire segment of True Ending is horrific, especially poor Sam like dude lost his skin. Even it being chibi-fied it was horrific.

And lastly in Good Ending: Sweetheart, it may have been nice to see Ghost lose all of the features and clothes that came from the Giselle, Hayde, Olivia, Sam, and Tim, maybe even lose his own name. I say that because MC makes it a point to say how only she is special to Ghost and as such, he should let them go and only have her as that was the deal. So for Ghost to lose all of that which is his identity would just show how he utterly loves MC. That and I would have loved to see an after story of the after effects of the 5 of the people who went missing, particularly on Olivia who was the keenest to get revenge. 

Aaaaaa I rambled for so long but goddamn I absolutely love this visual novel! It's really impressive for it to be your first game! I'm really looking forward to see what else your mind can conjure, have a great day/night~!

BROOOOOOOO I KNOW THE SOUND U ARE USING I USED FOR A PROJECT OF MY OWN ITS THE BROKEN PIANO :DDDDDD

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i got all the endings :DDD

i know he's a murderer but he's soo cute hahah

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Save slots don't work.................. :(

Hello! Mind if I know which device you're playing on? If it doesn't work maybe you can try to press save button on the red circle I marked or refresh website again. (I play this on tablet btw) Let me know if this help you or not :)

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I was playing this on a chromebook (AKA web browser) when I had tried both using that save button, AND the one in the menu

Game was awesome nontheless, just dont feel like playing the entire thing  again just to make one different choice, you know?

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Also, why is Ghost sooooooooooooooooooooo hot!?!? 😩🥵

Hi,I wanted to download this game but i can't find the download button?^^;

is this a play in browser?

if it is then it won't really play for me

This IS a play in browser, sorry

I love this game it's amazing! There are no credits at the end though and it looks like more than one illustrator made the art and backgrounds so I was wondering where I could find everyone who was involved in this project, or if you made all of this yourself where I can find more of your work!

spoilers!!(By the way I'm flipping the whole thing, which is a little confusing)


I decoded the Morse code at the end of the game!

This is what they wrote:i love you/you belong to me/keep you eyes to me

thank you to create this fantastic game!!!love this game so much

Really loved this game and the endings. 

I love this so much TwT soo cute 

🤍LOVE THIS GAME🖤

Ok so the white text is a problem, I cant quite read it or see what it says especially when the background is bright.

This was awesome! I loved how each ending gave a scary twisted ending. :D

cool game, i rlly love the illustration ‹𝟹

Uwaa TT I love ittt

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This is your first game and its really good!! I was scared while playing this game and discovering the ending because I got the bad ending first T-T. Hope to see more games from you :)

Awww thank youu! I'm glad you like it <3 Hope you have a great day!!